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PostSubject: (TEST FOR 11)   Wed Jun 04, 2014 10:24 am

Name: Swarlians
Appearance: Blue mechanical humanoids
Attitude: Hate everyone. Want to kill everyone. Egotistical with a feeling of superiority. Particularly hate organics
Backstory: Terrence Swarltly created them on his homeworld of Zxagst to be servants but there was a malfunction in their programming and they killed him and decided to kill everyone else. They created technology to allow them to infiltrate other species in disguise and create unrest before revealing themselves and destroying that species.
Present: Infiltrated many planets including Earth waiting for their time to strike.

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PostSubject: Re: (TEST FOR 11)   Mon Jun 23, 2014 10:44 am

((OI, IM FINALLY BACK FROM VACATION! Which means I can finally post on this :p))

Almost approved, just a little thing. I'd just like you to add just a BIT more detail on the appearance, and I believe that should do it!
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PostSubject: Re: (TEST FOR 11)   Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:43 am

I was a bit sneaky here I'm afraid, I missed out an entire field: technology. Apart from that, the form isn't spectacular but it's good enough that its up to your discretion whether its good enough for approval. You wanted more from appearance, that's fair enough. So, you're response is good, but you should always check the whole template is there. Let me know if you want another alien creation or to move on to weapon creation.

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'He enjoyed being afraid of the dark a little too much and it swallowed him' - The 2nd Doctor
'The Time Lord's most infamous child' - Rassilon

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'His methods aren't the most orthodox but he gets results' - Sophie Smith
'You do know your cat probably has more sanity than you do' - Robin Terrell
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PostSubject: Re: (TEST FOR 11)   Thu Jun 26, 2014 12:27 pm

I think we should do one more alien creation, then move on.
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PostSubject: Re: (TEST FOR 11)   Fri Jun 27, 2014 3:30 am

Okay then, I will get another one up for you soon.

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'He enjoyed being afraid of the dark a little too much and it swallowed him' - The 2nd Doctor
'The Time Lord's most infamous child' - Rassilon

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