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Samlagton King Of Kaldra

Join date : 2014-08-29
Age : 15
Posts : 11
Location : Kaldra

PostSubject: The Malaagans (finsihed)   Fri Aug 29, 2014 3:04 pm

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Appearance:Humans In space suits

Attitude: the The Malaagans
are tyrant powermad race thats eats planets for resoureces and energy

Technology: They inventid forcefields and are 2000 years over the humans

Backstory:The Malaagans are born evil and are just like the daleks/galactus (kinda)

Present: The Malaagans Strive to become gods (like gods) (sorry)

Homeworld:Kaldra a very hot planet kinda like mars and galifrey  (looks)
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Age : 18
Posts : 882
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PostSubject: Re: The Malaagans (finsihed)   Fri Aug 29, 2014 4:08 pm

Again, I cannot approve this, you need to expand way more on this concept, where is their home planet and what sort of culture do they have? Any religions? The planet itself is very lacking in detail, the whole race cannot simply be power mad, otherwise they had a chance of wiping themselves out, how is that prevented? Planets have features, how big, how small, does it have mountains, grasslands, polar caps…you get what I am saying?

With 2000 years advanced technology over the humans, one is bound to expect more backstory to them than "They are born evil" how did they become like that? How can they eat planets? There are a lot of unanswered questions and the forcefields, expand on it.

Why did they take on the form of humans with spacesuits? What do they look like without the suit on and if their planet is hot and like mars, wouldn't the 'Humans' be born with features that allow them to cope in that sort of weather?

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