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PostSubject: Kinicinari   Mon Dec 22, 2014 2:23 am

Name: Kinicinari

Abilities (what does it do): Kincinari is a birch stick, with a sharp plasma scythe blade at the end. It is portable, and foldible. I should really be using, "he". Once again, using the Quades technology, they had a Forken butler turned into a scythe. The scythe actually enjoys the company of Night, and has, romanticized feelings towards Katrana. He is protective, but polite.

Appearance: A tall large Scythe that glows at night.

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PostSubject: Re: Kinicinari   Mon Dec 22, 2014 6:36 am

The weapon is a good basis, but please expand on how it causes the agony, does it do it with magic? How quickly does it kill them? Also, explain how the scythe came into the world, in a sense. It doesn't have to be super long, just enough so players know it better and that maybe add in a few weaknesses, because currently, it seems slightly overpowered.

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PostSubject: Re: Kinicinari   Mon Dec 22, 2014 10:50 am

Sorry!

It came into the world by will. It is sort of alive in a sense. It travels to find the right person to handle it. Night, the holder of this weapon is forcing it to be hers. It CONSTANTLY tries to escape. It's weakness is it's nasty attitude. The way it causes agony is my slowly burning and cutting the person's flesh. You just slice and dice.
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PostSubject: Re: Kinicinari   Tue Dec 23, 2014 10:53 am

Questions that spring to mind:

How did it come into the world by will? And how exactly is it alive?

At the same time, there are definitely ways of exploring the concept of this weapon. If it just slices and dices, range can be an issue for the user as well as it's nasty attitude (can you elaborate on this please?)

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PostSubject: Re: Kinicinari   Tue Dec 23, 2014 4:11 pm

It is a "demon" trapped in an object. It was trapped in another universe of torture, but escaped. I fell in the middle of the desert on Earth. Night managed to find it surrounded by glass because the sand was heated up so much. It can be reluctant on agreeing with the user. It is a difficult weapon to handle. Range isn't really a problem. You wave the scythe, and it burns the person. It's like a sword. I'm not a gun person.
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PostSubject: Re: Kinicinari   Wed Dec 24, 2014 4:51 am

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