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Uji Latermi
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Join date : 2015-01-24
Age : 30
Posts : 2
Location : Kiksville, England

PostSubject: Uji Latermi   Fri Mar 13, 2015 4:35 pm

Uji Latermi

Species: Human
Age: 27
Gender: Boy
Occupation: Rich Bartender
Status: Rich


::Appearance::
Hair: Messy Light Brown
Eyes: Hazel
Height: 6' 2"
Figure: Slender, masculine body.
Other: A large tattoo of the Illuminati Eye.
Clothing: Black Tee; baggy denim jeans.

::Info::
Family: His grumpy father, that wants him to take over his company.
Personality: He thinks he's such a lady killer but he's not. He laughs loudly, and he isn't very attractive. He is son of the famous, world known Dealing Latermi. He is boss of the company that makes clothing. He doesn't really like the company, and is being forced into it. He is blind in one eye, and can't move his left pinky.
Strengths: His charm, sense of humor and use of weapons.
Weakness: He gets scared easily, and is really dumb
Likes: Ladies, His Dad, Winter, Dogs.
Dislikes: Ladies that are reluctant, Summer, Cats
Dream: That he'll find the perfect girl.

History: Uji was born on April 30th, at 6:17 PM. He was raised in wealth, and went to public school until he started to be bullied about his half blindness. He went home, and was moved to Kikersville Academy for the Youth, when he was 14, and got into a fist fight with the class bully, Teri McGreda. Teri took out his knife and slashed Uji's finger open, cutting a nerve. He graduated from high school, and is still deciding if he wants to go to college. His mother died when he was 11, of Scarlet Fever.

HOW DID YOU FIND US?: I heard that this was an "ok" website for rping from and RP list.

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This section is for you to show us your roleplaying skills. What is going to happen is you will read a standard problem for your character to react with. What we are looking for is a proper Roleplay reply, standard character, explaining what you would do in the situation.

Rules: Please make your response at least a six to nine sentance paragraph.
Please make your responses in 3rd person (ex: Sonya blinks her eyes.)
You need to explain your roleplay, use as many details as you possibly can to describe what you are doing and what is going on around you.



The Doctor is stuck under a flickering streetlamp, you are on the opposite side of the street. It's midnight, no moon or stars, the only lights around are the lamp the Doctor is under, and the light in front of a closed store you stand under.

The only way to the Doctor is to cross the dark street, easy, right? Wrong. This planet is well-known for being infested with Vashta Nerada. Any shadow anywhere could be infested with them. You have a small pack on your back with several items in it that you could use to get to him.

A carrot
The Doctor's Sonic screwdriver
A chicken leg
A flashlight
Book of matches
A rubber duck
a raincoat

Scratching his neck, Uji turned around to see someone named "The Doctor" under a street lamp. He turned to the bag that sat lightly on his foot, and grabbed it, spilling out the contents. He took a hearty bite of the carrot, and put the rest in his pocket. Throwing the chicken leg aside, the meat disappeared. He was about to put his finger in, when common sense came to him. Meat = Gone = Bad. Uji tossed the flashlight back and forth in his hands, and flicked the light on. He shone the light in the path, and strolled across it, humming fancifully as he thought about women. He bumped into the Doctor, and muttered an apology under his breath, refusing to introduce himself to him.
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PostSubject: Re: Uji Latermi   Tue Mar 17, 2015 5:18 pm

Hey Uji,

I'm reviewing your app and as it's looking good so far, there are small changes that could be made.

The detail in the history seems rather brief and often surrounds a major event, which is great, but perhaps go in further detail about his father and because it seems to end at the age of 14...what happens between then and current age of 27? What did he do during that time? You mention a grumpy father, but you don't describe it in his history.

Overall, really good, but would you mind working on that and letting me know?

Thanks,

Brax

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