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Aidan Langhoff
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PostSubject: Aidan Langhoff    Fri Nov 20, 2015 11:38 pm

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Aidan Langhoff
Species:Human
Age:36
Gender:Male
Occupation:Engineer
Status:Loyal
:: Appearance::
Hair:Curly Hair
Eyes:Brownish
Height:5.2
Figure:Muscular.
Other:Scar On Left Eye.
Clothes:Trench Coat,Khaki,Nike Shoes.
::Info::
Personality:Very Exited At Times.
Strengths 3-1
Weakness 2-3
Likes 2-2
Dislikes 3-1
History:Aidan Was A Very Respected Engineer Until One Day He Could Only Describe As "Sin" He Got A Scar On His Eye He Decided To Get A Eyepatch On His Left Eye,Now He Wishes To Explore With The 9th And 10th Doctor As Though He Sees The Doctor Commonly.
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The Sontarans Have Attacked You,But You Have A Bag With 5 Items What Item Will You Use To Defend Yourself And Stun The Sontarans




Items
Revolver
Flashbang
Wrench
Hide!
All OF These!

Flashbang :3


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PostSubject: Re: Aidan Langhoff    Sat Nov 21, 2015 3:31 am

Hey Cyber, please use the templates provided and wait for the admin to review it... [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] , once you have filled it out and edited with the sonic screwdriver, let us know Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Aidan Langhoff    Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:04 pm

I Am Done Making My Character And Alien,I Must Make The Alien's Planet and Complete The Copies
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PostSubject: Re: Aidan Langhoff    Sun Nov 22, 2015 10:05 am

Your profile is still lacking strengths, weaknesses, likes, dislikes, and the personality needs to be far more than two words. Your history also needs to be considerably buffed out. Like childhood life. Why did he decide to become an engineer? What happened that he lost his eye?

And I'd be careful about RPing meeting the doctor and knowing them well without one of their approval first. Usually the policy is to write up a character who hasn't met the Doctor yet, then run into them in a roleplay.

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PostSubject: Re: Aidan Langhoff    Sun Nov 22, 2015 1:18 pm

To add on to what Meta said, the Roleplaying section is not the one we had provided in the template and it's to get a feel for how your character reacts to a certain situation, at minimum 5 to 6 sentences.

Additionally, where is the section that includes the family? If he does not have any, please state so, rather than deleting the field.

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