Character: Zane Marx

Name: Zane Marx
Species: Human
Age: 17
Appearance: 6'0". He has green eyes and brown hair that spikes up in the front. His legs are the most muscular part of his body from running so much. The rest of his body is pretty well toned.
Attitude: Very crazy, extremely reckless.
Quirks: Likes puns. His hair smells like Subway bread.

Weapons/Gadgets: Is able to create a short lasting shield around himself or someone else. He can only have one shield active at a time and it takes a while for him to be able to make another one.

Back Story:
When Zane Marx was 6 years old, his parents abandoned him in the rainy streets of Orlando. He found a home with some other boys that lived in the streets. He agreed to help them steal cash from tourists as long as he could stay in their makeshift cardboard home. He found that he was very good at taking things without being noticed. After 4 years, he had stolen over $15,000 dollars. He had only been allowed to keep $1,000 because the other kids always said they needed it more. He soon found out that they were all addicted to drugs and were using him for his talents. He felt bad for the people he stole from and wanted to help out. He gathered as much money he could find and went on a walk to......somewhere else. Before he could make it to end of the street, he was punched in the back. He lost all feeling in his torso and panicked, wishing that he could protect himself. Something happened. Something that he couldn't understand and still doesn't. His body was glowing orange and he couldn't feel the punches. His assailant stopped in confusion. Zane ran as fast as he could, trying to get into the large crowd that had gathered at one of the storefronts. He told himself that he would never let anything happen to him again and wouldn't stay in the same place for too long. He kept true to that until he turned 17. That is when he met the Doctor. Not personally, he was just nearby when he saw him and some girl. They got into a small Police Call Box and it just vanished into thin air. He decided to stick around that town to see if he could find some answers from this mysterious man.

I like it, but I have a question, are you planning on keeping Crash as a secondary character? In case someone decides to have a RP with Daleks in it, you could go in and do the Dalek part so they can focus on their characters.

Other than that, I approve. It seems pretty straightforward. But maybe you could go into detail in a RP about how he's able to create the shield so people aren't confused about it. Then once you figure it out, put it in the Character Study forum so everyone knows how.
You get my stamp of approval

-Sonya-
~Administrative Staff~

Yeah. I'm gonna keep Crash as a secondary. Thanks for the approval.

no problems :3 have fun with your new character