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sydney/Vanessa
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sydney/Vanessa

Join date : 2013-12-04
Age : 23
Posts : 115
Location : on a run

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PostSubject: Re: Shadows of the past (Closed to Brax/ Darren)   Shadows of the past (Closed to Brax/ Darren) - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 13, 2014 8:02 pm

((Fixed))
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Age : 20
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PostSubject: Re: Shadows of the past (Closed to Brax/ Darren)   Shadows of the past (Closed to Brax/ Darren) - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 14, 2014 6:11 am

((Syd? I'd just like to let you know you're cutting it dangerously close to the post length limit. Just remember to write at least a paragraph, okay? If people are having trouble replying, it might just mean you need to put more attention to detail into your replies. Ex:

Sydney walked to the store. (x)
Sydney crossed her arms, rubbing them to keep her warm on the frosty walk to the cafe.

See what I mean? Now you know it's cold, too. And you could take THAT further if you wanted to show how if she didn't mind, or if it bothered her, but you know, don't want run on sentences either. But you get it, yeah? 

And then for Brax: I don't know what's going on in the RP, atm, but just for the record, if an RP feels like it's finished, then it probably is. It's easier to start a new one when you're done if the other person is finding it hard to reply, okay? *justincasecauseidontreallyknowbutitlookedlikeitsoyeah* >.>))

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PostSubject: Re: Shadows of the past (Closed to Brax/ Darren)   Shadows of the past (Closed to Brax/ Darren) - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 14, 2014 12:50 pm

((Alright. We start another one. How does that sound?))

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((OK. You start the new one since I started this one))
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((Sure!))

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