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PostSubject: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeMon Mar 10, 2014 5:03 am

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Character name: Claudia Altermann
Species: Human
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Occupation: None
Status: On the run, Jewish

Appearance:
Hair: Long and brown often done in a plait
Eyes: Sparkling green
Height:6'1"
Figure: Skinny
Others: Scar going all the way down from upper thigh
Clothing: Often a dress, with stockings and boots with a heel. Often wears a long coat

Family: Claudia has a mother, whom she calls Mama, a father, whom she calls Papa and a little brother named Hans. She lost her family on the 14th of December 1941 (the first day of Hanukkah) after the SS dragged them away and subsequently killed them.

Personality: Claudia was known at her local school and neighborhood for being quite clever and shrewd, excelling in most of her subjects, especially science. However she was also quite secretive, keeping a lot of her emotions bottled up. Claudia is also very quiet and shy, not having many friends, around four in total. Her demeanor most of the time is shy, nervous and over all very quiet.

Strengths: Very clever, shrewd, cautious

Weakness: Skinny but not very athletic, clumsy

Likes: Reading, Science Fiction novels of the time (H.G Wells, Jules Verne etc etc), the Torah, and Great Britain (As in the country), and lastly Caramel

Dislikes: The Nazi Party, German classical music (Bach, Mozart etc etc), Tomatoes and licorice.

Dreams: She hopes to attend the University of Cambridge, in the UK, and perhaps study Physics there, her utmost favorite subject. She also wishes to see her long time friend Peter Schauss again.

History: Claudia was born on the 1st of March 1924, in a world recovering from war and disease but on the edge of financial collapse. She was born in Dresden, Germany, her parents 3rd generation German-Jews. Her father was a solider in the Great War, serving in the German Army at the time. He managed to survive and set up a Tailor's in Dresden, until it was ransacked during the Nazi instigated Kristallnacht, (Night of Broken Glass). At a young age, Claudia was very outgoing and happy, but as time progressed and things grew worse, she became quiet and shy. She loved attending school, but only made a few friends, having a high level of trust. As Anti-Semitic laws grew stronger, she was banned from attending school, and spent most of her days reading, sometimes banned writers like H.G Wells, one of her favorites. In late 1940 she went into hiding, living in the attic of her house. Her family led fake clues, stating that they fled to the Netherlands, (Unoccupied at the time). Eventually the SS raided her home and in the confusion she managed to escape with a small suitcase filled with her most personal belongings. As stated earlier, her parents and brother were shot. As of now, she's on the outskirts of Dresden, seeking passage out of the country, but as each day passes, the Nazi's advanced further into Europe, she's worried she may not make it.

How did you find us?: I searched for Doctor Who Roleplay and this was the first site to appear

Roleplay: It rained lightly on the city of Dresden, but no one was there to bother about it, most were at home, celebrating the latest
success of the Wehrmacht, as it steamed it's way into France and the lower countries. Well almost everyone. Young Claudia Altermann clutched her small suitcase, and hugged her long trench coat, as the harsh gale blew in her direction, gripping her slender body. She kept her head down, and avoided any military personnel at all costs, they began checking papers on an average basis now. She turned the corner, trudging along slowly, trying to look inconspicuous. At the end of the street she saw two lonely soldiers, standing on the sidewalk, smoking a cigarette. She noted their bored, they probably longed for the glorious front, instead of being stuck in Dresden. Still, cautiously she crossed the street, instead of turning around and attempted to walk past them unmolested. As Claudia was about half way across the street a young man called, one of the soldiers "You, hey! Ya yeah you! Come here! What are you doing with that suitcase? Aren't Juden are you?" Claudia froze with fear, they'd kill her on the spot or worse send her to one of those camps she'd heard about. The men laughed and slowly walked towards her. In an instant she bolted off, trying her hardest to escape. But they were in hot pursuit, catching on to her fast. In an attempt to shake them, she ran into an alleyway. A wave of fear came over her as she noticed a man at the other end of the alleyway, staring at her. She froze again, the soldiers almost turning the corner to were she was, and the man staring at her from the other end. She quietly muttered to herself "I'm done, I'm done for, this is it". Claudia ran, running toward the man, not even caring anymore, read to accept her fate.....



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PostSubject: Re: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeMon Mar 10, 2014 10:46 am

I would ask that you review the [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] and follow it exactly as we have outlined it. It helps us get the full grip of your character so that we can approve of it.

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PostSubject: Re: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 11, 2014 4:05 am

I've went ahead and edited my character creation script, is it satisfactory now?
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PostSubject: Re: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 11, 2014 6:09 am

Um... Nearly. I love the character (seriously, this is brilliant, you get applause :3) but the RP section is a bit off. There was a prompt given, I'm not sure if you saw it? Could you edit it and use the prompt, please?

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PostSubject: Re: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeWed Mar 12, 2014 5:06 am

I'd go with the prompt but I don't think it really suits the characters setting and time. Having said that, if it's a must have requirement, I'd be happy to go back and change it for you
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PostSubject: Re: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 14, 2014 6:22 am

So, er, what now? Sorry!
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PostSubject: Re: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 14, 2014 4:20 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 14, 2014 6:38 pm

So i'm in? Really? Yay! Thank you so much!
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PostSubject: Re: Claudia Altermann   Claudia Altermann I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 14, 2014 8:59 pm

Lol david bulldozing his way through as usual *prods* I applaud your character too Claudia Smile can't wait to see ya in the forum.

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