|Alex Becker/Finn O'Riley|
Join date : 2013-10-29
Age : 21
Posts : 147
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|Subject: Metacrisis Doctor Thu Apr 03, 2014 7:05 pm|| |
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Metacrisis Doctor (John Smith)
Occupation: Lead Alien Tech Scientist at Torchwood
Status: A government agent
Hair: Brown hair that sticks up all over the place even though he uses hair gel
Height: 6’ 1”
Figure: Skinny (You get a paper cut when you hug him jk)
Clothing: Blue pinstripe suit that sometimes has a lab coat over it.
Personality: Meta is very sassy. He also rants about science related things and doesn’t realize when people are not listening any more. He comes off as a happy person but he really is very depressed.
Strengths: Extremely smart and compassionate.
Weakness: Childish at times but also fairly depressed.
Likes: Bananas, Technology, and Books.
Dislikes: Being alone and Pears.
Dream: Getting back to the other universe.
History: After being left in Pete’s world with Rose Tyler him and Rose tried to have a relationship. Only to have a huge falling out and they don’t talk any more. After that he got a job a Torchwood as Lead Alien Tech Scientist. He has been attempting to make a device to get to the other universe. He is getting very close. Once in a while he will bump into Rose and things get very messy. He doesn’t like to talk about it though.
HOW DID YOU FIND US?: I role play as David Chase.
P.S. Robin said Meta is available and if he isn't please tell me THANKS!
Join date : 2013-04-28
Age : 20
Posts : 1775
Location : Not the zoo, that's for sure.
|Subject: Re: Metacrisis Doctor Thu Apr 03, 2014 7:30 pm|| |
Not approved, sorry.
The history is VERY lacking, not to mention you haven't said how you plan on RPing him into this universe yet. Your entire form is pretty lacking, really, but I think you really need to focus on your history.
Join date : 2013-04-25
Age : 28
Posts : 2830
Location : Anywhere, Doing whatever.
|Subject: Re: Metacrisis Doctor Thu Apr 03, 2014 7:51 pm|| |
Alright I read enough.
Family: You really need to go into detail with this, explain the time war, then explain how Donna and Ten helped create him. Techincally family if you think about it. Then go on to explain the type family he has on Pete's world.
History: This definitely needs to be fuller. There is so much more that you could say in this right here. Go into detail, have fun with it, come up with your own little story explain everything that he's done since he stayed with Rose on Bad Wolf Bay. Did they get married? Did they split up? Are they living together, at her parents, their own place? What kind of job does he do? How good is he, how well did the other Torchwood members/ Family accept him at first? How long has it been, what's his main goal in everything that he does there?
|Doctor Meta Z|
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 27
Posts : 301
|Subject: Re: Metacrisis Doctor Mon Apr 07, 2014 3:36 pm|| |
Given my constant state of flux, and leaving and coming, I may honestly not play the Metacrisis Doctor, to be fair and let someone else use him. But...continuity much? /me points at the Universes thread in the archives. For some characters who end up getting rotated between people, it may be advisable to put up a page on a character with threads and history bits over time so there aren't continuity issues. (Just my thoughts though.)
|Subject: Re: Metacrisis Doctor || |