Cassidy (PRACTICE FOR ROMANA)

Subject: Cassidy (PRACTICE FOR ROMANA) Tue Apr 15, 2014 6:09 am

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Cassidy Lemmings

Species: Pro-Human
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Occupation: Model/Actress
Status: Rich and famous

::Appearance::
Hair: Refer to the picture
Eyes: ^
Height: ^
Figure: ^
Other: ^
Clothing: ^

::Info::
Family: She doesn't know any of her family.
Personality: Cassidy is nice. Everyone loves her. She's pretty and she flaunts it, but no one minds because they are all drooling over her.
Strengths: Pretty, powerful, gorgeous, rich, perfect.
Weakness: Has bad breath in the morning?
Likes: Boys, people paying attention to her, money
Dislikes: Stupid people, annoying people, people who don't think she's pretty, people who don't care about her. You get the picture.
Dream: She wants to be the richest prettiest most powerful woman ever.

History: Cassidy was born in the future on a perfect world where humans were the most beautiful and perfect they could be. And then time travel sent her to present Earth where she became a model and an actress.

HOW DID YOU FIND US?: Google

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This section is for you to show us your roleplaying skills. What is going to happen is you will read a standard problem for your character to react with. What we are looking for is a proper Roleplay reply, standard character, explaining what you would do in the situation.

Rules: Please make your response at least a six to nine sentance paragraph.
Please make your responses in 3rd person (ex: Sonya blinks her eyes.)
You need to explain your roleplay, use as many details as you possibly can to describe what you are doing and what is going on around you.

The Doctor is stuck under a flickering streetlamp, you are on the opposite side of the street. It's midnight, no moon or stars, the only lights around are the lamp the Doctor is under, and the light in front of a closed store you stand under.

The only way to the Doctor is to cross the dark street, easy, right? Wrong. This planet is well-known for being infested with Vashta Nerada. Any shadow anywhere could be infested with them. You have a small pack on your back with several items in it that you could use to get to him.

A carrot
The Doctor's Sonic screwdriver
A chicken leg
A flashlight
Book of matches
A rubber duck
a raincoat

*Runs over to Doctor* Doctor are you okay? *flips hair* Here's your sonic *gives* Now what do we do about the Vashta Nerada? *kisses*

((This hurt me physically. Just try your best to catch everything you can and I'll be in the corner vomiting ^^))

Subject: Re: Cassidy (PRACTICE FOR ROMANA) Tue Apr 15, 2014 8:46 pm

Hello Cassidy, welcome to the site! We'd love to have you write with us, but your app needs a little fixing up first.

Species: I'm not familiar with Pro-humans. Perhaps she could be just a human. Wink

Appearance: I understand there's a picture there for reference, but please take the time to fill this out. We can't, for example, know her height from a headshot.

Family: Please explain why she doesn't know her family.

Personality: Please change this, and make it a bit longer. Nobody is loved by everybody!

Strengths: Nobody's perfect. Wink

Weaknesses: Please add some. Perhaps she's not very strong?

History: Please elaborate. How did she time travel to present day Earth, and why? What was her childhood like? How did she become an actress and model? Etc., etc.

RP section: This is very lacking. Perhaps you could benefit from reading our [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] There should be a lot of detail in this. What is your character seeing, feeling, thinking? Also, the Doctor is on the other side of the street. You are not with him. Please re-write this.

((robin y must u hurt me this way?))

Subject: Re: Cassidy (PRACTICE FOR ROMANA) Tue Apr 15, 2014 8:52 pm

PERFECT.

You did great. In the future, though, remember that if the species doesn't exist and isn't a posted one yet, that you can remind them to make an alien creation for it. Everything else is just about what I would have put SO *applause* Razz

I apologize for the pain, by the way. I'll make another in a bit. Also, take a look at Chinner's character and see what goes on, okie doke? Just to get a feel for how fixing things goes. You'll get more of an idea when I teach you to deal with stubborn members. Now THAT will be fun. For me. ^^

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