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Audrey/Amy Pond
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Join date : 2014-01-23
Age : 24
Posts : 221
Location : Looking for the Doctor, be back in the future

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PostSubject: DAKOTA HEMMEL   DAKOTA HEMMEL I_icon_minitimeSat Jan 25, 2014 7:36 pm

Character Name: Dakota Hemmel
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Species: human
Age: 19
Gender: female
Occupation: runaway looking for the Doctor or a job
Status: a regular girl, who knows the Doctor
 
 
 
Hair: a little bit past shoulder-length brown hair. Reddish-brown highlights.
Eyes: blue-gray, depending on the day, greenish blue.
Height: 5'8
Figure: slim, tall, curvy
Other: Heart tattoo on right wrist
Clothing: usually wears jeans and sweatshirts, sneakers.
 
Info: likes school
Family: Mom and Dad are alive, but not important in her life. They are still together, after years of arguing. She is actually a triplet, and has two other siblings, Morgan and David. Allthough they dissapeared one day...
 Personality: Dakota Hemmel is a tomboy, with not interest in jewlery or pretty clothes. She'd much rather be reading than be at a party. She actually likes school, and is the kind of person who really wants to accomplish their dreams.
Strengths: very good at avoiding temptation. Book smart and street-smart
Weaknesses: kinda gullible at times
Likes: reading, singing, writing poetry
Dislikes: mushrooms, annoying people
Dream: that one day she'll meet the Doctor again. Or that she will be a well known scientist. She also really wants to find her siblings. This one thing bascally runs her life.
 
History: Dakota's parents were very abusive, being drunk all the time.  Dakota was too smart to give in to this, and eventually couldn't take it anymore. One day, when she was eleven, Dakota ran away with her best friend Alexa. Dakota is somewhat shy, but once you get to know her, she's really fun to be around. As a kid, she was always quiet, and Dakota didn't have many friends, besides Alexa. Dakota has always done well in school, and science has always been her favorite subject. Dakota isn't really a violent person, always aiming to help people and the enviornment. Her siblings David and Morgan were taken one day; they vanished mysteriously. Her whole aim is to find them.
 
HOW DID YOU FIND US?: I was just searching for a doctor who rp site, because I am VERY addicted to Doctor Who. Ask any of my friends! My best friend banned me from talking about doctor who for a week because I was being so annoying!
 
Roleplay:
 
 
It's a dark night, and Dakota can only see one thing illuminated by a streetlight across the street- the Doctor. The only problem is that the whole deserted, dark street is infested with Vashta Nerada. remember what he said, she tells herself. He had told Dakota before that the Vashta Nerada were confined to the shadows. Not  every shadow, but any shadow. So she needs to be careful. Dakota has a few things in her backpack, including some food and the Doctor's own sonic screwdriver. She's been trapped in this circle of light for about ten minutes, and has had time to come up with a plan. She has some matches in her pack, and takes them all out, along with the chicken leg and the full length carrot. Taking a match, she lights it and places it just outside the circle of light that she's standing in. Taking the chicken leg, she throws it cautiously in front of her into the shadows. When the leg is untouched, she smiles and pushes the match farther into the shadows. Now with small pieces of carrot, she  goes a few feet away from the first match, and working quickly, she puts the piece of carrot on the street. Again, the carrot is untouched by the Vashta Nerada, so she lights and places another match. Continuing with her plan, she eventually makes a path of matches, going toward the Doctor. When she gets to the end, reaching the Doctor's side, she laughs and throws her arms around his neck with relief.


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Age : 24
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PostSubject: Re: DAKOTA HEMMEL   DAKOTA HEMMEL I_icon_minitimeSat Jan 25, 2014 8:14 pm

I'm sorry, I don't know how to post the picture.
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Age : 25
Posts : 1778
Location : Not the zoo, that's for sure.

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PostSubject: Re: DAKOTA HEMMEL   DAKOTA HEMMEL I_icon_minitimeSat Jan 25, 2014 9:45 pm

Alright, how about this:

Any defining characteristics besides the ones you've put in your form? I can look for a picture for you because you can't copy the link. 

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Join date : 2013-11-15
Age : 25
Posts : 885
Location : Traveling the universe.

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PostSubject: Re: DAKOTA HEMMEL   DAKOTA HEMMEL I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 26, 2014 9:30 am

Or it can be your profile picture for a while?
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PostSubject: Re: DAKOTA HEMMEL   DAKOTA HEMMEL I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 30, 2014 8:39 pm

Not Approved.

For one - sorry I didn't get to it sooner, didn't see that you finished it.

ANYWAY! You just need to touch up two little things:

1 - Your history is a bit... lacking. Just put in more details, anything that makes her unique, anything that's important to understand about her.

2 - Your RP sample is a bit off, too. You were asked to reach the Doctor on the other side of the street, but you did a completely different thing - not to mention the random bang that was never explained. 

Touch those up and I think you're set ^^

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PostSubject: Re: DAKOTA HEMMEL   DAKOTA HEMMEL I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 31, 2014 3:20 pm

I think that it's approved, just need that final confirmation before I approve and then…welllll…I'll wait for the admins or the SOs to come and have a look. Your RP is looking better!

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PostSubject: Re: DAKOTA HEMMEL   DAKOTA HEMMEL I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 31, 2014 3:51 pm

Hm. Not honestly sure.

I think... Approved for now? Let's see how you do.

Side note: Vashta Nerada wouldn't eat a carrot anyway.

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