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TheNextArcher Newb
Join date : 2013-08-19 Age : 24 Posts : 28 Location : Sestine-7
| Subject: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 4:18 am | |
| [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]The ArcherSpecies: Well if no Timelords then Part Sestinian Age: 273 Gender: Male Occupation: Finding adventure. Status: Nope, not rich, not famous, nothing. ::Appearance::Hair: Brown Eyes: Brown Height: 5' 9" Figure: Slim Other: N/A Clothing: Mostly armoured up, but underneath I have a striped shirt, a waistcoat and some shorts. ::Info::Family:Brother - The Saver Sister - The Kitten Sister in Law - Melissa Cartaci Personality: Since my regeneration I have mellowed considerably, I think before I do, I put the good of others first and I try my best to make sure no one gets hurt. Strengths:I have special armour on that protects me from the likes of most earth weaponry and I can resist a good punch. I am also quite compassionate, though some may say that's a weakness. Weakness:I am not the smartest of beings. I won't hurt a fly. Likes:Saving the universe My Tardis Robert Holmes "The Anonymous" Dislikes:Word problems. Math problems. Problems. The universe being blown up by a stupid timelord who can't control his Mark 40 Tardis *ahem* Dream:To be reunited with my family and to somehow find pieces of my homeworld that I can store safely away. History:I was grown in the Time War through the last leaf of the planet Sestine-7 and I was forced to fight on the front line, I was then pulled onto Mondas during War-Time by the Saver to help defeat the Shagna who had destroyed all but one of the Cybermen, who turned out to be the Agent, we then carried on fighting, I lost all my friends that day, caught in a wind and never to be returned, I spent lightyears looking for them, but to no avail, so I took my TARDIS back to Sestine-7 to see what my homeworld was like... It was nothing, nothing at all. I thought to myself what to do now, my homeworld is gone, as are my friends, my family, my people. So I plotted some random co-ordinates and landed on a Dalek Ship, where I was promptly exterminated, I regenerated wiping out an amass of Daleks and looked around the room, which seemed to be a control room. I was wrong, of course. It was a satellite, these Daleks were monitoring every sector of the universe, I used this opportunity to find whatever I could, all I could find was him, the Doctor. He was the only one who survived so I named my Time Machine after his, the TARDIS. After this, I got back into my TARDIS with hope in my heart and I knew that somewhere in the Universe, I wasn't alone, I could fly away, I could leave this place, I could go anywhere, but I would never ever be alone. | |
| | | TheNextArcher Newb
Join date : 2013-08-19 Age : 24 Posts : 28 Location : Sestine-7
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 7:53 am | |
| By the way, who is actually allowed to approve characters? | |
| | | 10th Doctor/Eric Jason Site Owner
Join date : 2013-04-25 Age : 37 Posts : 2036 Location : The TARDIS
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 7:56 am | |
| ONLY because you were here before hand, i will approve of you being a Time Lord.
However, i do not approve of your own personal TARDIS, instead i urge you to use creativity and imagination to come up with a way he got out of the Time War other than a TARDIS or vortex manipulator. No more Time Lords are being approved of but sense you were here before hand, like i stated above, i will approve of it.
We don't want 200 members all being Time Lords and having their own TARDIS's, kind of destroy's the arks of canon and also the personalities of the 9th - current Doctors. | |
| | | 10th Doctor/Eric Jason Site Owner
Join date : 2013-04-25 Age : 37 Posts : 2036 Location : The TARDIS
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 7:57 am | |
| Approving of characters is restricted to Site Owners and Administrators | |
| | | TheNextArcher Newb
Join date : 2013-08-19 Age : 24 Posts : 28 Location : Sestine-7
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:00 am | |
| Okay, thanks for the approval, I will think of a new means of transport and probably include it in my own story or something and once again, thanks for the approval ;D | |
| | | 10th Doctor/Eric Jason Site Owner
Join date : 2013-04-25 Age : 37 Posts : 2036 Location : The TARDIS
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:18 am | |
| No problem. Btw, i think i like this Archer better than the other one Very cool XD. What happened with your other account? | |
| | | TheNextArcher Newb
Join date : 2013-08-19 Age : 24 Posts : 28 Location : Sestine-7
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 9:15 am | |
| None of the passwords I used worked, and I only have three variations of password, so... ._. I just made a new one, I still need to think of a regeneration story for the 1st Archer. And possibly turn it into a script? | |
| | | 10th Doctor/Eric Jason Site Owner
Join date : 2013-04-25 Age : 37 Posts : 2036 Location : The TARDIS
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 10:25 am | |
| I can help you with that. We can plan here if you'd like I will check and see if i can fix that problem with your original account. | |
| | | TheNextArcher Newb
Join date : 2013-08-19 Age : 24 Posts : 28 Location : Sestine-7
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 10:26 am | |
| I don't need my old account back, it's fine;) Sure, we can come up with a story:D We should do a closed RP for it, me, you and maybe Sonya? | |
| | | 10th Doctor/Eric Jason Site Owner
Join date : 2013-04-25 Age : 37 Posts : 2036 Location : The TARDIS
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 10:32 am | |
| Yeah that'd be good XD
I just checked for your old account. It is no longer on the site, that's why you couldn't get on. Something happened to it. What? I have no idea.
What did you plan to happen around the regeneration? I find it best to focus on something else then have the regeneration at the end as the icing on the cake sort of speak. Doesn't have to be anything HUGE but just a good all around story. | |
| | | TheNextArcher Newb
Join date : 2013-08-19 Age : 24 Posts : 28 Location : Sestine-7
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 10:39 am | |
| Well basically, after the Time War, my brother (The Saver) had left for his own adventures and my companion (Melissa) had died fighting the Cybermen, my evil side (The Shagna, who I will be posting about in Monster Creation ;3) had fled and survived the Time War and the Archer was depressed and didn't know what to do, he got a distress signal from an unknown being (Later revealed as the Daleks) and gets shot by them, causing him to regenerate, he destroyed the Daleks that killed him by using his regeneration energy, fueling it into them and causing them to implode, he then realized he was in a satellite, monitoring every sector of the known universe, he used the satellite to see if there were any Time Lords left, to see if there was anything left of his home planet Sestine-7 and to see if there was anything worth checking out, he found The Doctor, Sonya, The Saver, The Agent, The Eagle (Most are made up Time-Lords that my friend's made up and seeing as they were part of his old adventures I thought it'd be good to mention them ;3) and the Burning Striker, he then set off to find them... That's what I had in mind for a while... | |
| | | 10th Doctor/Eric Jason Site Owner
Join date : 2013-04-25 Age : 37 Posts : 2036 Location : The TARDIS
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 11:18 am | |
| Ok. That's a lot of backstory going on there dude. A bit too much if you want to hurry up and get the regeneration story out there and that RP you plan with us three.
Try this:
The Cybermen, after killing your companion, learn of your part in the Time War, and with their ever growing upgrade systems they decide to search the universe, looking for potential Time Lords to rebuild their armies. They build the satellite in which you get wrongfully drawn to, as they have planned to do with all the other surviving Time Lords. Have some of your made up Time Lords be found dead and converted when Archer gets there. He regenerates and manages to escape due to the light from his regeneration blinding the Cybermen just enough for him to escape and run for his life. With Archer running, he desperately tries to find any remaining Time Lords to help him and stop the Cybermen from converting all of them.
It gives the story a solid enemy and is still there throughout the story but also gives you time to integrate new characters. Like your story is good, but once they all meet up, it will go very slowly because there is nothing for them really to do. | |
| | | TheNextArcher Newb
Join date : 2013-08-19 Age : 24 Posts : 28 Location : Sestine-7
| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 11:27 am | |
| Okay, that's just what I had in my head for a while, but yours is quite a lot better ;3 | |
| | | 10th Doctor/Eric Jason Site Owner
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| Subject: Re: The Archer. Wed Aug 21, 2013 11:42 am | |
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