person thane

Species:Werewolf

Age: 18

Gender: male

Occupation: none

Status:poor

Appearance:

Hair:Jet black short

Eyes:human form its dark blue were pitch black

Height: 6 feet in human form 8 feet in were

Figure: very fit muscles clear

Others:in were form has torn ears and claw marks on chest

clothing: ragged pants and torn up shirt

Family:killed

personality:very temper some times

strengths:food,sleep

weakness: Silver,moon light in ways

Likes:Hunting,fighting

dislikes:Being shot,getting beat in fight

Dream:be best and strongest were and be able explore any where

history:When he was 4 he parents were killed by were hunters. He fled and hid till he was 14 where first shift happen and was more powerful while were hunters grew stronger in time he was hidden in dense forest he been many fights with them over next 4 years while growing in strength skill his knowledge grew with him he learned how dodge enemies and blend in with the land and be one with surrondings.

Not approved.

Again, your history is lacking. That, and you still do not have a picture. This was supposed to be your last chance, but since you started all over, I think it would be fair to let you try ONE last time to fix this character. Be warned, this is your final shot now, whether you try to start over again or not. You can refer back to the other thread to get some ideas for your history details, but since those are more aimed at the dragon, you could refer to these:

Where does he live now?
Does he fit in with society?
How did he grow his strength and knowledge?
Is there anything else important about him that we should know?

-Nat of the Administrative Staff-

Are you serious right now?

You think just because you create another C.C you think that you won't have to make edits? This C.C is just as flawed as your previous attempt. Look back at what we all sent you on your previous C.C attempt, all of those tips still apply here.

If you continue to post new character creations (C.C's) you will receive a warning. Once you reach three warnings you will be deleted off of this site and your internet data footprints will be permanently blocked and yes, i can do that. So instead of testing me, i suggest you either fix this thread or your previous one.

~10th Doctor
Site Owner