OC: John River

Character Name HERE

Species: Human
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Occupation: None
Status: A normal London citizian


::Appearance::
Hair: Brown Nad Blond
Eyes: Navy Blue
Height: 5 feet and twelve inches
Figure: John is very skinny and has white skin. He has normal arm and leg size.(Please tell me if I need too specify anything else, I'm not the best rolplayer.
Other: None
Clothing: John River wears a variety of clothing. mainly navy blue jeans, a t-shirt, and a black cotton jacket.

::Info::
Family: John River is the son of Brian River and Kate River (Formely Kate Song)
Personality: John is a person who will use logic to find out a problem. He is very caring to others and has a great sense of humor. Most people say he is the most unique person they have ever met, mainly, because of his random knowledge of everything. He likes to use tech all the time. Because of this, he has high experience in using it. He is also very friendly
Strengths: 2
Weakness: 3
Likes: 4
Dislikes: 3
Dream: John always wanted to invent something that would trend.

History: John was born and raised in London. he grew up programming things. One day, he saw a police box just disappear. since this, he has tried to find out as much as possible about it, and once he learned enough, time travel.

HOW DID YOU FIND US?: I was bored and looked for some random doctor who site. Conveniently, I found this. I read some rps, and decided the next day to join.

Not Approved

For one, you don't have any strengths, weaknesses, likes, or dislikes listed. 

Your history is also lacking quite a bit.

Also, you don't have a picture up.

ALSO, you're missing the entire RP sample section. You can find it back where you got the template.

I think that's it, but I might be missing something.

-Nat of the Administrative Staff-