Ashara
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 |  Subject: Flesh Doctor  Fri May 23, 2014 7:07 pm | |
| ((Have an Image but can't post it for 7 days apparently)) Flesh Eleventh Doctor/Matt Smith Species: Flesh Age: Less than a Day Gender: Male Occupation: None ((The Flesh Doctor isn’t a Timelord…hope to find him an Occupation through RP)) Status: Rogue ::Appearance:: Hair: Wavy Brown Hair, Long bangs that like to get into my eyes. Eyes: Green Height: 5’11” Figure: Tall and lanky. Other: None Clothing: Brown Tweed suit coat, sometimes a brown overcoat depending on the environment I am in. Under the coat I have red suspenders holding up tight fitting black or brown dress pants. Normally I wear a blue dress shirt with a Red or Brown Bow Tie because Bow Ties are cool. On my feet I wear black or brown Chelsey Boots. ::Info:: Family: I have no other family; one person I feel is like family to me is the real Doctor. Personality: I am off the walls. I have troubles focusing on one thing but I am capable of putting my mind to one thing. I enjoy helping people even though they sometimes don’t realize they need help or want my help. If you hurt someone I care about I will show a darker side and come after you with all my being. Strengths: Clever, Smart, ability to think on my feet when my first or tenth plan fails. Weaknesses: I can care too much which can lead me into trouble. I try to help everyone. I am always running away from things that I don’t want to deal with. Likes: Finding new things, helping people in need, Bow Ties, Fezzes. Dislikes: Violence and losing people that I care about. Dream: A time in which I no longer have to Run. History: I woke up in pain. So much pain I had to scream out. Memories ran through my mind of a long life lived. I saw death and destruction but I also saw happiness. All these memories became mine, as if I had lived them. Soon after I awoke, I heard my own voice talking to me and I found out I was not the man who lived out those memories. The Real Doctor had a crisis on his hands, I had all his memories and everything he thought, so I helped him and his companions get out safely. The Doctor gave me a gift of his Sonic Screwdriver before he left. As soon as he left I was destroyed, shortly after though due to me embedding a pulse in the Sonic Screwdriver I was able to rebuild myself. Sadly I couldn't save the others, as soon as I stabilized I searched the factory for a way off the island. When I left the factory I found a boat in the water and I took it to the mainland to find purpose in the world. ((I know more happened on this site and if it is needed I will add it)) HOW DID YOU FIND US?: The person playing the Meta Doctor told me about it and encouraged me to join. Flesh Doctor looked across the street to see the Doctor standing under a flickering street light, he frowned slightly and thought, I need to get over there and fix that light before the Vashta Nerada get him. The Flesh Doctor pulled out his Sonic and scanned the darkness around him to see if there were any active Vashta Nerada around him. The Flesh Doctor brought his sonic up to look at it, noting that there were a lot of active Vashta Nerada around him. “Well…that’s not good,” The Flesh Doctor said, moving his bangs out of his eyes. At least I was the one who was carrying the supplies, The Flesh Doctor thought before pulling the pack of supplies off his back and setting it down on the ground, before squatting down and opening the pack. “Let’s see here…The Doctor’s screwdriver, why do I have it…well that explains why he doesn’t have it,” The Flesh Doctor laughed slightly before pulling more things out of the pack. “Rain Coat, Torch, a rubber chicken, a book of matches, a carrot and a chicken leg,” The Flesh Doctor said, picking up the Rubber Chicken and the book of matches. “Good, have some useful things in here to help me,” The Flesh Doctor said, before striking the match and setting the rubber chicken on fire, before lobbing it as close to the center of the road as possible. “There, have a somewhat safe spot now for when I am walking across,” The Flesh Doctor said, before leaning down and grabbing the carrot. “I shall have a snack before I walk,” The Flesh Doctor said, taking a bite of the carrot before spitting it out. “Blegh! I hate Carrots!” The Flesh Doctor said, before throwing the carrot over his shoulder. The Flesh Doctor leaned back down, leaving the raincoat, torch and the matches out and putting the Doctor's sonic in his suit pocket. The Flesh Doctor put the torch in his left hand and put the rain coat on it, before striking a match. Setting it on fire and putting his own sonic in his right hand, he started walking toward the now burning rubber chicken, keeping a mindful eye on the shadows that surrounded him. The Flesh Doctor walked until he made it to the burning rubber chicken. “Wheeww…that smells bad…” The Flesh Doctor said, waving a hand in front of his nose. The Flesh Doctor lightly threw the rain coat in front of him, making another safe spot, before pulling the pack off his back. Setting that on the torch and using a match to set it on fire, he continued his walk to the Doctor. The Flesh Doctor finally made it to him and pointed his Sonic up at the light to stabilize the light from flickering anymore. There, one problem down, The Flesh Doctor thought. [OOC Leaving the other one per the request of the Meta  ] - Original post:
“Well, this is a fine mess you got us into,” the Flesh Doctor said, shaking his head trying to stay in the light that was in front of the store. “Me?! You are the one that wanted to come here in the first place!” the Doctor said, moving slightly under the flickering street light. “Yes but it was your idea to walk on both sides of the street while looking for the Tardis,” the Flesh Doctor smirked while looking through the darkness. “And to be fair, I didn’t know there were Vashta Nerada,” the Flesh Doctor said, inching slightly away from the shadows near him. “Well you should have told me it was a stupid idea when we first started then,” the Doctor quipped back with a small glare. The Flesh Doctor smirked. “Well at least I have the supplies so I can get over to you hopefully.”
The Flesh Doctor pulled the pack from off his back and started pulling items out of it. “Let see what we have here…a chicken leg, a carrot, a torch, a book of matches, your sonic, a rubber chicken and a raincoat.” The Doctor looked up, “I had wondered where my sonic had gone…” The Flesh Doctor laughed slightly before slipping the sonic into the inside pocket of his suit coat. “Right, well let’s see if there are any Vashta Nerada active here in front of me,” the Flesh Doctor said, taking the chicken bone and throwing it in the shadows in front of him, almost instantly the flesh on the bone was gone. “Well, I guess we have our answer then…” the Flesh Doctor gulped slightly. “So I assume you have a plan?” The Doctor asked, looking slightly concerned at seeing the chicken leg. “Of course I have a plan!” the Flesh Doctor said, picking up the rubber chicken before striking a match and setting the rubber chicken on fire and quickly tossing it as far into the middle of the road as he can.
“Well that is going to just smell wonderful here in a few minutes, but that isn’t enough light you know,” the Doctor said, looking at the burning rubber chicken. “Yes, I am going to use it as a safe spot,” the Flesh Doctor said before grabbing the rain coat, torch, and another match before putting the pack back on his back. The Flesh Doctor struck the match, setting the rain coat on fire before putting it on the end of the torch and starting to walk towards the now brightly burning rubber chicken. “Oh man! That was my favorite rain coat!” The Doctor wailed. “You don’t wear rain coats,” the Flesh Doctor mused trying to concentrate on staying in the light of the fire. “I know but if I did, that would be my favorite one,” the Doctor said, smiling wide.
The Flesh Doctor rolled his eyes slightly before making it to the safety of the burning rubber chicken, and then he tossed the still burning rain coat slightly in front of him. “Well what did you do that for?” The Doctor asked with a questioning look on his face. “It’s just more protection, just in case,” the Flesh Doctor said, pulling the pack off his back, taking out the carrot and sticking it in his mouth, before taking another match and setting the pack on fire and putting it on the end of the torch like he did with the raincoat as he started walking forward more quickly this time. “Having a snack are we?” the Doctor asked, laughing. The Flesh Doctor nodded before pulling the carrot out of his mouth with his free hand. “Yes, I am hungry, this is hard work you know,” the Flesh Doctor said, finally making it to the Doctor.
The Doctor smiled. “Well done! But now we have another problem,” the Doctor said. “And what’s that?” The Flesh Doctor asked, looking curious. “I see now that the Tardis was on your side of the street,” the Doctor said, nodding toward the blue police box that was located in the store that had been behind him. “And why didn’t you say this while I was walking over here?!” the Flesh Doctor asked, looking slightly angry. “Well, you seemed to be on a roll and I thought it would be rude to stop you,” the Doctor said almost nonchalantly. The Flesh Doctor brought his hand up to his face. “Wonderful…”
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Sayo/9Th Doctor
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| | Subject: Re: Flesh Doctor Fri May 23, 2014 11:02 pm | |
| One: You can't control another character in an RP. The example is meant to be an actual reply rather than what you thought it was. Sorry, it should have been specified. Please edit your responce to be as if you are replying to another Rper stuck in the situation that the Doctor is in.Two: The history of the Flesh Doctor is a bit of a moot point. I know a little bit of it, but the one you need to talk to about it is Mal, or rather Lucius on here. She's the one who had the most history with him. Pm her and tell her the history would help you develop your character to blend in better.Two: If I remember right, Origional 11 left the Sonic with Flesh 11 before he left. So you do have one. Just a friendly reminder  Other than that, this looks good, just please please edit your rp example to fit better (AKA: Don't control the Doctor in trouble) and ask about the old Fleshy's (Old nickname from the other person who played him) history on the site. If you want, it might be easier to gather who all had history with him by posting in the general chat forum about who all had things to do with him. You did a fantastic job, and don't worry about the picture, we forgot about the seven day wait period for images. Just post one as your icon (Which you did, cudos for figuring that out) and you'll be good.-Site Owner -Sonya (AKA: Tyra) | |
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Ashara
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| | Subject: Re: Flesh Doctor Sun May 25, 2014 3:36 pm | |
| Edited in a new RP response. | |
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Sayo/9Th Doctor
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| | Subject: Re: Flesh Doctor Sun May 25, 2014 3:41 pm | |
| You're still controlling the other Doctor, you only control your character hun. | |
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Ashara
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| | Subject: Re: Flesh Doctor Sun May 25, 2014 3:54 pm | |
| No..Look above that one | |
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Sayo/9Th Doctor
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| | Subject: Re: Flesh Doctor Sun May 25, 2014 4:02 pm | |
| oh lol, I expected you to erase the other one my bad xD brilliant use of the rubber chicken, tho now I'll have to mourn it's sacrifice. Brilliant in all aspects  full marks my friend APPROVED BY SONYA (AKA. TYRA) | |
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