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Join date : 2014-01-23 Age : 24 Posts : 221 Location : Looking for the Doctor, be back in the future
| Subject: The Sword of Rubies (The Sword Of Calont) Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:01 pm | |
| Name: The Sword of Rubies (The Sword Of Calont)
Abilities (what does it do):The Sword of Rubies can cut through almost every material. It cannot cut through diamond, and cannot cut tyhrough anything bulletproof, for some reason. The ruby in the hilt gives the handler of the sword extra strength. The ruby was forged by the Ood, and they made it magical. It has a ruby sheath, and if lost, will return to the sheath after a half hour. -Just a really good weapon to have when facing baddies.
Appearance: *Place picture of weapon/device here followed by description* http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs9/i/2006/029/0/b/Ruby_sword_by_stupar.jpg
Mostly plain silver sword with a twisted handle. there's a ruby inserted in the hilt of the sword, which gives the handler of the sword extra strength. the tip is razor-sharp and can cut through most materials. ((how Dakota got it will be explained in rps)) ((only made just in case Dakota needs a weapon for any reason))
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Robin Administrator
Join date : 2013-04-28 Age : 25 Posts : 1778 Location : Not the zoo, that's for sure.
| Subject: Re: The Sword of Rubies (The Sword Of Calont) Sat Feb 08, 2014 12:13 am | |
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For one, how does the ruby give the user strength? It must have some sort of power or something, so please describe it.
Also, apparently it can cut through everything, which is basically a powerplay and looked down upon, not to mention such an ability would need an explanation, like the ruby. Could you downsize that a bit? Just enough so it's not so 'invincible'.
ALSO, when Dakota does get a hold of it, you'd need a proper explanation, alright? If you end up RPing it out, alright, but if not, please let us know how she managed to get her hands on it.
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