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Robin
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Join date : 2013-04-28
Age : 24
Posts : 1778
Location : Not the zoo, that's for sure.
 |  Subject: Time People (Practice for Romana)  Sat Apr 19, 2014 9:09 am | |
| Name: Time People
Appearance: Time People look just like humans except they can have wings and exotic colored eyes. They can also have any color skin and regenerate infinite times.
Attitude: Time People are just like normal people. They have different emotions and things.
Technology: Time People have time-space ships called AERTIOs and a bunch more advanced junk.
Backstory: Time People live on Garrifrey, and just do whatever they want.
Present: After all of them except the all-powerful prince escaped, the prince wanted a new life on Earth. 'The Nurse", as he goes by, does what he pleases as, with his special powers, he can do anything.
((Yes I got kind of lazy but yeah here you go)) | |
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Romana II
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Join date : 2014-03-17
Age : 34
Posts : 186
Location : Gallifrey
| | Subject: Re: Time People (Practice for Romana) Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:35 pm | |
| Hello there! There appears to be a few big problems with your application.
You've just made Time Lords but with a ever so slightly different name. You can not have a race of people that regenerate. Sorry. You've also named their home planet Garrifrey, which is extremely close to the Time Lord's home planet of Gallifrey.
Also your present makes no sense. Escaped from what? You have also not stated what "special powers" he has. Whatever they may be, however, he cannot do anything. Every character and race has limitations.
With regards to their time-space ships: Can you tell us more? How do they work, what do they look like, etc.? | |
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Robin
Administrator
Join date : 2013-04-28
Age : 24
Posts : 1778
Location : Not the zoo, that's for sure.
| | Subject: Re: Time People (Practice for Romana) Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:36 pm | |
| Perfect.
I especially like the not jumping to conclusions bit for the ships. Well done. I'll have another up in a bit but I gotta baby sit the chat right now o-o
-Nat of the Administrative Staff- | |
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Romana II
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Join date : 2014-03-17
Age : 34
Posts : 186
Location : Gallifrey
| | Subject: Re: Time People (Practice for Romana) Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:37 pm | |
| Bunch o kids in there with their codpieces and their giant babies and... oh wait that was me. | |
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Robin
Administrator
Join date : 2013-04-28
Age : 24
Posts : 1778
Location : Not the zoo, that's for sure.
| | Subject: Re: Time People (Practice for Romana) Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:38 pm | |
| See? Look what you've started. Next thing you know they'll be wandering around sumo-wrestling birdsnakes. | |
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Romana II
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Join date : 2014-03-17
Age : 34
Posts : 186
Location : Gallifrey
| | Subject: Re: Time People (Practice for Romana) Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:41 pm | |
| I never told them to wrestle wildlife! I refuse to be held responsible for that. They're not MY children! | |
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Robin
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Join date : 2013-04-28
Age : 24
Posts : 1778
Location : Not the zoo, that's for sure.
| | Subject: Re: Time People (Practice for Romana) Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:42 pm | |
| They will be soon. And you will accept that~ | |
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Romana II
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Join date : 2014-03-17
Age : 34
Posts : 186
Location : Gallifrey
| | Subject: Re: Time People (Practice for Romana) Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:43 pm | |
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