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PostSubject: Madricorns   Fri Jul 04, 2014 4:07 pm

Name: Madricorns

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Appearance: Most Madricorns (approximately 70%) have orange hair and amber eyes.  Some, maybe 10%, have white hair and blue eyes.  Another 20% have a combination.

Attitude: Madricorns are basically the humans of another galaxy. The difference is their attitude toward each other. Madricorns are altogether nicer than  the humans of Earth. They run a society that is the same as Earth's. Most Madricorns work, make money, and do whatever they do with that money, just like humans. Only a few people know why, but there is absolutely no deception or crime anywhere in their whole galaxy.

Technology : Madricorns are much more advanced that Earth. All of those movies about futuristic Earth is basically how the Madricorns are. You are able to have a contact lens that you can use Internet on. In the Madricorn galaxy of Fantine, you are able to have a doctor implant a chip in you so that you can remember your dreams. You can talk to your TVs, as well. The doctors of Fantine also have a chip with which you can understand animal speech.   Madricorns are very technologically advanced. Not many deseases affect these people, either. Doctors are very advanced. The Madricorns have invented a multitude of invisible objects, and who knows why. Entertainment purposes, surely. Many items are still being invented. The Galaxy of Fantine has many inventors who love their jobs!
Madricorns have invented multiple spaceships to get to other galaxies,  such as The Milky Way. Scientists in Fantine have invented something similar to a Vortex Manipulator,  except it works off of thoughts. You have to picture where you want to go or else it won't work.

Madricorns age a bit slower than humans. A human born at the same time as a Madricorn would age at a faster rate. If you took a newly born human and a newly born Madricorn,  and you put them next to each other, the human would, say, be four, and the Madricorn would obly be approximately two. Humans age approximately two years faster than Madricorns.


Back story : Madricorns used to be a very violent race. No one could agree on ANYTHING, and not much was accomplished. Wars broke out very often, ending with the planet Borallium becoming a dry wasteland. (Due to nuclear weapons) There was a small group of Madricorns who refused to partake in the violence.  They were called, simply, Maddens. They slowly travelled to each planet in the Galaxy of Fantine,  explaining their acts of kindness and compassion. They slowly but surely led everyone to kindness and compassion as well. This didn't happen overnight, try 57 years! Fifty-seven long and difficult years for these freedom fighters. But their goal was accomplished! At the end of those fifty-seven years, everyone was much kinder in every aspect of their lives. Everyone decided that they were tired of arguing and not getting anything done. Too many Madricorns died in too many wars. Everyone had had enough, and it turned out fabulously for the Galaxy as a whole.

Present : Nowadays, Madricorns live out their lives in peace. Almost every one has a job, and mostly everyone is happy. (Except those with chronic depression)

'Presidents' of Fantine are called Whooles. There is one Whoole assigned to each continent, normally.

'Birds' of Fantine are called Winios sometimes.

'Bees' of Fantine are called Deels. They are quite abundant on the home planet Krahl.

'Dragons' of Fantine are called Springles. They can communicate with the Madricorns only.

The leaders of the Springles are called Scrabs. They are essentially the Presidents of the Dragons.

All of the trees throughout the galaxy have orange leaves. All planets have golden grass.


The Madricorns' main goal is to communicate with other galaxies. Being a social species, they always aim to have a good time with everyone. Their kindness helps out with many relationships, wether ut be with other Madricorns or with other species. (Such as humans)
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PostSubject: Re: Madricorns   Sun Jul 06, 2014 5:55 pm

It may be my imagination, but this screams "Superhuman" to me.

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PostSubject: Re: Madricorns   Sun Jul 06, 2014 6:10 pm

Is that a good thing or bad thing?
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PostSubject: Re: Madricorns   Sun Jul 06, 2014 6:34 pm

Since I have to explain myself, basically it's a race of humans, who have access to higher technology, can get older (though when I initially read it I thought that they'd live twice as long), are resistant to diseases or at least most of them. But it's still a human with advantages.

But as I said, it may be my imagination.

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PostSubject: Re: Madricorns   Sun Jul 06, 2014 7:38 pm

Definition of Alien:4. a creature from outer space; extraterrestrial.

This meaning that any creature from outer space, including my Madricorns, is an alien and should be included in the alien section if I want my character to be this alien.
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PostSubject: Re: Madricorns   Sun Jul 06, 2014 7:43 pm

Ok, a few things.

Attitude: "Madricorns are basically the humans of another galaxy." I'm not sure what you mean by this. Did you forget the word humanoid or are you trying to draw a parallel between Madricorns and humans that I don't understand? HOW are they basically the humans of another galaxy?

"Only a few people know why, but there is absolutely no deception or crime anywhere in their whole galaxy." Yeah, we need to be one of those few people please.

Technology: Much more advanced than Earth at what time? Remember, Earth humans get pretty frickin advanced in later centuries. If you're trying to say that they're more advanced than our current 21st century technology, then please tell me approximately what century Earth and Madricorn's technology becomes similar.

Also try not to repeat yourself and organize your thoughts better. you kinda jump around.

"Scientists in Fantine have invented something similar to a Vortex Manipulator,  except it works off of thoughts. You have to picture where you want to go or else it won't work." So they invented Harry Potter-like apparation? Neat! (excuse the nerd moment)

The slow age part of this should go in the appearance section. Also, I need clarification. By "humans age approximately two years faster than madricorns" do you mean that a Madricorn born at the same time a 28 year old human was born is only 26, or that Madricorns age at half the rate of humans and the madricorn is actually 14? If its the earlier... how does that work?

Back story: Why did the warlike Madricorns not slaughter the nice pacifists on sight? I get that they were tired of fighting and all that, but to convince an ENTIRE GALAXY of constantly warring people to convert to peace in less than 60 years seems a bit much to me. I feel like that number should be in the mid-triple digits.

Present: why are the dragons not able to communicate with each other? Also the fact that dragons have a functioning society and political structure needs explanation, please.

As it stands right now, I'm not approving this. It seems to me that you've just created a race of peaceful, technologically advanced gingers. Which, hey, that's cool. But like Meta said, they're kinda just humans with advantages. They're barely aliens. Their slow aging is the most unique thing about them.
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PostSubject: Re: Madricorns   Sun Jul 06, 2014 8:30 pm

Thanks for your help Rommie, I'll work on it sometime this week while at camp if I have free time. Smile
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