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PostSubject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this)   Luna Moona (please delete this) I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 29, 2014 5:53 pm

If you are creating a character, please use the application template that is provided, also, please do not forget to include the RP sample given at the bottom of the application.

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PostSubject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this)   Luna Moona (please delete this) I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 30, 2014 1:18 pm

There is a lacking in how we see your character in te personality, please write 5-6 sentences on your character, allowing others to get a good grip on your character such as what makes them tick, how are they like with other people, etc. Also, you didn't explain why they had a spaceship?

Please finish off the RP sample, okay? Thanks!

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PostSubject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this)   Luna Moona (please delete this) I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 01, 2014 3:48 pm

I mean, everything looks alright but the RP section is on the short side and doesn't really make sense. The Vasta Nerada are meat-eating things that you cannot see and that you cannot avoid.

Your character was born with injuries? How and why? Also, if your character is part alien, please elaborate and explain it (or make a alien creation) Or why they are half cat? I mean it's getting better but please make the changes Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this)   Luna Moona (please delete this) I_icon_minitimeSat Aug 02, 2014 2:55 am

My apologies. It's was just that they can be both invisible and shadows as you know when they threw the chicken leg? I didn't see a shadow but my apologies anyway.

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PostSubject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this)   Luna Moona (please delete this) I_icon_minitimeSat Aug 02, 2014 11:35 am

Accepted Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this)   Luna Moona (please delete this) I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 17, 2014 11:31 am

Why?

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PostSubject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this)   Luna Moona (please delete this) I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 17, 2014 2:04 pm

Finish your application for Rose Tyler, and then you can switch it out.
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PostSubject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this)   Luna Moona (please delete this) I_icon_minitimeMon Aug 18, 2014 3:53 am

You can keep the app but you'll simply RP under a different name...

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