Luna Moona (please delete this)

Beginner Join date : 2014-07-29 Age : 23 Posts : 76

Luna Moona

Species: half cyborg quarter cat quarter human (I have no fur and a short tail but you can't tell that I'm cyborg unless you concentrate on my voice or eyes or movements. They show I am part machine.)
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Occupation: Traveller
Status: Rogue/Hero
Hair: Dark Blue
Eyes: Electronic Blue
Height: '5'0'
Figure: Hourglass
Other: None
Clothes: When I am traveling, I wear an outfit somewhat like what Indiana Jones wears. I always wear my ring, which was given to me by my mom.
Family: All of my family is dead.
Personality: I am lonely so I make up for that by saving people. I choose my words quickly and maybe too fast, but I get the job done. I tend to think of my home planet a lot. I am dark when my friends get hurt. I get angry very easily. I think of myself a lot like the doctor. People tend to dislike me because of my bizarre appearance. I try to be kind and caring but it's not easy. I hurt people's feelings without thinking.
Strengths: Smart, clever, fast
Weaknesses: Weak, impatient, cyborg (people don't like cyborgs)
Likes: computers, electricity, milk, games
Dislikes: dogs, slow things, water, nuts
Dream: to do more adventures! And kill cybermen.
History:
I was born with many injuries because my mom, Mindy Moona(human), was poisoned before she gave birth to me and had to be part cyborg to survive. My dad, Mark Moona(cat person), died before I was born and my mom died right after she gave birth to me. I got their house, money, and the kitty from their will. I am an only child. My grandma, Diana Moona raised me, but was killed because of cybermen when I was six. I swore to destroy all cybermen I could find. I sold the house due to so many painful memories, and took off in the kitty to see the universe.

I look at the doctor thinking of how to get to him. "Doctor!" I yelled, scared. I didn't know how I could possibly get over there. But then an idea popped into my head. I took his sonic screwdriver out of my purple bag and make the flickering light solid. I took out the flashlight and as I walk, I wave it around, looking for nv, knowing they take the form of shadows. I got the chicken and the carrot out of my bag. I eat the carrot. I notice a few shadows and avoid them as a walk towards him. When I get there I wave the chicken around him. "All clear." I hand him his sonic screwdriver and a rubber duck and say, "Next time, don't pack me things I won't need." and I smile brightly.

(Delete this please)

Beginner Join date : 2014-07-29 Age : 23 Posts : 76

If I did it wrong then please tell me what I did wrong.

Subject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this) Tue Jul 29, 2014 5:53 pm

If you are creating a character, please use the application template that is provided, also, please do not forget to include the RP sample given at the bottom of the application.

Thanks Smile

Subject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this) Wed Jul 30, 2014 1:18 pm

There is a lacking in how we see your character in te personality, please write 5-6 sentences on your character, allowing others to get a good grip on your character such as what makes them tick, how are they like with other people, etc. Also, you didn't explain why they had a spaceship?

Please finish off the RP sample, okay? Thanks!

Subject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this) Fri Aug 01, 2014 3:48 pm

I mean, everything looks alright but the RP section is on the short side and doesn't really make sense. The Vasta Nerada are meat-eating things that you cannot see and that you cannot avoid.

Your character was born with injuries? How and why? Also, if your character is part alien, please elaborate and explain it (or make a alien creation) Or why they are half cat? I mean it's getting better but please make the changes Very Happy

Beginner Join date : 2014-07-29 Age : 23 Posts : 76

Vasta Nerada take the form of shadows. They are not invisible. And, for the sake of the doctor who universe, I hope they never will be.

Subject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this) Sat Aug 02, 2014 2:55 am

My apologies. It's was just that they can be both invisible and shadows as you know when they threw the chicken leg? I didn't see a shadow but my apologies anyway.

Beginner Join date : 2014-07-29 Age : 23 Posts : 76

Is my character good now?

Subject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this) Sat Aug 02, 2014 11:35 am

Accepted

Beginner Join date : 2014-07-29 Age : 23 Posts : 76

Beginner Join date : 2014-07-29 Age : 23 Posts : 76

Can someone delete this? Thanks.

Subject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this) Sun Aug 17, 2014 11:31 am

Beginner Join date : 2014-07-29 Age : 23 Posts : 76

I wanna switch this character out with a different one. Namely, Rose Tyler.

Subject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this) Sun Aug 17, 2014 2:04 pm

Finish your application for Rose Tyler, and then you can switch it out.

Subject: Re: Luna Moona (please delete this) Mon Aug 18, 2014 3:53 am

You can keep the app but you'll simply RP under a different name...

Beginner Join date : 2014-07-29 Age : 23 Posts : 76

I don't want the app anymore. May it be destroyed?

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