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PostSubject: The Forken   Mon May 25, 2015 1:18 pm

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They are VERY strong, but a little on the dull side. Their horns are really sensitive, so they wear plastic covers on them. When They get mad, two males would interlock with each other, and attempt to throw them across the room. This sport is called "Ram Running".Well, I never said the horns weren't strong, they're just rather sensitive, so ram running wouldn't be very common, but yes, the horns are strong.
Well, twice the height of a normal person
The backstory; well, they stemmed from one- The Main Forken- Takos. He went insane, and gained followers. They live in their ship, which was built by willing people.
They've had too many wars, but the most significant? See Tricon. It gave them enough slaves.
The way the are more blood thirsty; they think they are getting close to their goal, conquering planets and such.
The army is the same due to the shots- which they give to them once a year, in their brain, dulling the emotions. They try to avoid ramming each other, because it actually really hurts, but "Ram Running" is forced. but the main Forken- which is currently Desmoil.

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Attitude: Rather rude, and constantly angry. They are very determined, and don't get along well with ANYONE. Not their species, not other species, no one.

Technology: They have mainly weaponry, and use large guns, the size of two people combined. They use huge ships, to compress all the 6 Billion Soldiers they have.

Backstory: Nothing made them. They were always bent on hate. Their Lust to rule the universe is so strong, they want to be in charge of the worlds. All of them. They love slaves- they love whipping them as well. They give shots to their soldiers. to remove emotion.

Present: More blood thirsty, more violent, more cruel. All of them are the same. An impeccable army. Trying to rule the universe.


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PostSubject: Re: The Forken   Mon May 25, 2015 2:07 pm

A few questions spring to mind, so if they do not get along with their species and I presume that ram running is rather common, wouldn't the horns be the strongest aspect of the alien? (just a small suggestion).

Also, perhaps expand on their physical aspects as it does mention being able to hold guns that are two person in size (would that be length wise or width wise?) Do they have a hierarchy?

The back story doesn't make too much sense, something had to have made them, where to they come from? What planet had they lived on previously? Why do they have the ambition for world domination? Any significant wars? These are just ideas to expand on the backstory a little bit more Smile

Why in the present have they become more blood-thirsty? What makes all of them the same and the army aspect? What are the shots they give them?

I know this seems a lot but it will help other roleplayers understand the species much better Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Forken   Mon May 25, 2015 2:14 pm

It's fine. Smile

Well, I never said the horns weren't strong, they're just rather sensitive, so ram running wouldn't be very common, but yes, the horns are strong.

Well, twice the height of a normal person

The backstory; well, they stemmed from one- The Main Forken- Takos. He went insane, and gained followers. They live in their ship, which was built by willing people.

They've had too many wars, but the most significant? See Tricon. It gave them enough slaves.

The way the are more blood thirsty; they think they are getting close to their goal, conquering planets and such.

The army is the same due to the shots- which they give to them once a year, in their brain, dulling the emotions.
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PostSubject: Re: The Forken   Mon May 25, 2015 2:17 pm

You say that ram ramming isn't common, yet the species hates one another, wouldn't that be a little bit more common and through evolution means, they would develop stronger horns?

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