user52356
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Join date : 2014-01-31
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Robin
Administrator
Join date : 2013-04-28
Age : 24
Posts : 1778
Location : Not the zoo, that's for sure.
| | Subject: Re: deleted-post Fri Jan 31, 2014 7:03 am | |
| Not Approved.
For one, your history is lacking. We need more details. Details about his childhood, things that were important in his life, how he got to where he is now - that sort of thing. Not to mention that Cybermen don't really have slaves, so that would be something you'd have to elaborate on for it to make sense.
Secondly, your RP sample is a bit off, as well. On this site, we strive to get our members writing at least a paragraph in reply. If you simply replied with that, how would someone else be expected to keep going? They would have no idea where to go with that because nearly nothing was given to them to work off of.
Lastly, you're missing a picture, which is in fact mandatory. I see you stated in there somewhere that you couldn't post one? If you want, I could help with that.
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