Hero: Time Warrior

Newb Join date : 2014-10-09 Posts : 1

Species: Human
Age:17
Gender: Male
Occupation: Time Traveller
Status: Citizen

::Appearance::
Hair: Black
Eyes: Piercing Grey
Height: 4"9'
Figure: Slightly thin and tall
Other: Eyes look like they pierce your soul
Clothing: Casual Wear, Nothing too restricting

::Info::
Family: Abandoned on streets
Personality: He is mystifying. He hates other people, because he was abandoned on the streets. His only friend is the Time Vortex, which brought him up as a child. He likes going into a hidden place and practicing his powers. He likes anybody that is a loner like him.
Strengths:
Can slow time
Telepathy
Telekinesis
Weakness:
Sends out signal to any aliens on the same planet as him
Not good at socializing
Likes:
Being alone
Practicing his powers
Dislikes:
Having no control over a situation
Other people
Dream:
To hone his powers totally and become a Time Warrior

History: His first memory was of him waking up on a street. He was 9 at the time, and he walked around, to gather information on his surroundings. He noticed a shining crack, and once he touched it, he fell through it. He was in a unimaginable space. It looked like everything and nothing at once. He heard a booming voice. It asked him, "Who are you?". He responded, "Hero". "Well, Hero, why are you here" asked the voice."I fell through a crack. What is this place, anyway?" Hero answered. "It is the time vortex. But how did you notice a crack? Only Time Lords can do that, and you are a human."."Time whats? Anyway, the crack was shining, so I touched it,and I fell into this," Hero answered."Well, you must train to develop these abilities you have. Let us begin." said the booming voice.

From then on, Hero honed his skills. He learned how to slow time, and use telepathy and even telekinesis. Ten years later, the time vortex spoke to him."Hero, your time has come. You must go out and use your skills in the real world.". Hero felt a tugging sensation, and suddenly he was back in the real world, ready to use his skills.

HOW DID YOU FIND US?: I looked up "Doctor Who Roleplay", and you seemed the most interesting, so I registered.

Subject: Re: Hero: Time Warrior Fri Oct 10, 2014 1:37 am

Hi! I'm not an admin, but that being said, you didn't do the given role play sample, you have to use that in order to be accepted. Also, not sure if the special powers are allowed, but that's not my place to say, however your description leaves a lot of holes, like for example;
What was this crack exactly?
Why could he see it when he was human if only time lords can see it?
Why would being able to see this crack give him any manipulation over time, even time lords can't do that, so what's different about him?
what was this voice, the Vortex in and of itself cannot speak(or at least we have no reason to believe it can)
also how did he survive being in the Vortex? Jack died being dragged through it.
And lastly what is a time warrior?

again I have no say over weather or not your character is accepted, but definitely add the sample and consider my questions.

Subject: Re: Hero: Time Warrior Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:08 am

pav, you did brilliant here. Thank you for helping. I was waiting to post on here until i got on a computer. It harder to expllain what is needed when on a tablet

Subject: Re: Hero: Time Warrior Fri Oct 10, 2014 2:54 pm

No problem. Normally I wouldn't step in since I'm pretty new to the forum, but I know you at least are having computer issues, and the worst that could happen is I was wrong.

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